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This is where you can post all of your comments about the story "A Journey Through Fire"


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I love the cyborg. When I read the description of him I thought.

"Its Cap'n Silver!"

AKA the cyborg bad guy from "Treasure Planet".



Anyway, its really good so far. I want to know why there is a massive underground structure close to the Saint's old base that is owned by one cyborg man.


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I love the cyborg. When I read the description of him I thought.

"Its Cap'n Silver!"

AKA the cyborg bad guy from "Treasure Planet".



Anyway, its really good so far. I want to know why there is a massive underground structure close to the Saint's old base that is owned by one cyborg man.


lol Cap'n Silver is exactly who I modeled him after and about the underground thing... It's a smuggling base very siimilar to the contingency and is actually a part of it... Just a very very hidden and secret part


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Aaahh.. I see! This is looking really great, I can't wait to see how you guys get off Ord Mantel.


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This looks exciting!


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I updated the story


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I like this story a lot. but i have a question, since i made my self the smuggler i was wandering if you finished with him in part 2 or if you had further plans for him.


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Quin desh he's all yours lol... And it fits nicely with how your character needed to find maxon


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Quin desh he's all yours lol... And it fits nicely with how your character needed to find maxon


Ya it does, thanks Happy


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I might have to join in eventually...but only with your permission and with an idea of where you want the story to go....


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Good job Falcon and Rahvin3. Really liked how this started off.
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I have added my part, please tell me what you think.


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Added another part. Happy


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Hey great job to both of you! The story is turning out to be very exciting! Can't wait to see how it all turns out! :D


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Think Hulk Hogan in his prime but without the bleach blonde hair color envy


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