Steel FalconSaint Jedi Guardian
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re: 2 Yr Anniversary Short Story Contest Entries
by Steel Falcon on May. 12th, 2011 8:16 pm
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Naandi if there is anything else you need just let me know :D
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Naandi
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re: 2 Yr Anniversary Short Story Contest Entries
by Naandi on May. 12th, 2011 10:08 pm
That's perfect, Steel!
To belatedly answer your question, a tagline (at least for this) is a five to fifteen word summary/hook for your story. Just to remind people what it's about.
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re: 2 Yr Anniversary Short Story Contest Entries
by Erolene on May. 13th, 2011 11:46 am
Visan wrote: | Erolene wrote: | The Overseer stroked his bread thoughtfully. “You’ll receive your normal payment, and since it’s an emergency, a little something extra; forgiveness.” |
Oh man, I have an absolutely fantastic image in my head of Jao slowly petting a piece of bread on his lap akin to that of a villain with a cat. |
Bahahaha!
Jao: *strokes a piece of bread* "This is Fluffy."
Meriline: "That's a piece of Wonder bread."
Jao: "Exactly. And it's fluffy."
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