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re: Killed - Again discussion
 by Nathan Johan on Oct. 8th, 2013 9:20 am
Hey everybody! This is the place where you can discuss my backstory! Please submit feedback and ideas!!! 
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re: GDPR#3309684
by GDPR#3309684 on Oct. 8th, 2013 11:01 am
GDPR#3309684
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re: Killed - Again discussion
by Nathan Johan on Oct. 8th, 2013 11:07 am
Thank you for first, looking at the story, and secondly providing constructive criticism!! I'll incorporate these pointers into future stories that I write.
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re: Killed - Again discussion
by Nathan Johan on Oct. 8th, 2013 5:05 pm
Made the recommended corrections. I especially like how Warpthorn suggested "their protectors" instead of "peacekeepers."
Please read and make comments!
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