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Hey everybody! This is the place where you can discuss my backstory! Please submit feedback and ideas!!!


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Thank you for first, looking at the story, and secondly providing constructive criticism!! I'll incorporate these pointers into future stories that I write.


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Made the recommended corrections. I especially like how Warpthorn suggested "their protectors" instead of "peacekeepers."

Please read and make comments!


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