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re: A Journey Through Fire comments
by Steel Falcon on Jul. 26th, 2010 10:45 am
This is where you can post all of your comments about the story "A Journey Through Fire"
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re: A Journey Through Fire comments
by Reginox on Jul. 26th, 2010 11:02 am
I love the cyborg. When I read the description of him I thought.
"Its Cap'n Silver!"
AKA the cyborg bad guy from "Treasure Planet".
Anyway, its really good so far. I want to know why there is a massive underground structure close to the Saint's old base that is owned by one cyborg man.
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re: A Journey Through Fire comments
by Steel Falcon on Jul. 26th, 2010 11:25 am
Reginox wrote: | I love the cyborg. When I read the description of him I thought.
"Its Cap'n Silver!"
AKA the cyborg bad guy from "Treasure Planet".
Anyway, its really good so far. I want to know why there is a massive underground structure close to the Saint's old base that is owned by one cyborg man. |
lol Cap'n Silver is exactly who I modeled him after and about the underground thing... It's a smuggling base very siimilar to the contingency and is actually a part of it... Just a very very hidden and secret part
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by Reginox on Jul. 26th, 2010 12:19 pm
Aaahh.. I see! This is looking really great, I can't wait to see how you guys get off Ord Mantel.
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by Erolene on Jul. 26th, 2010 1:08 pm
This looks exciting!
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re: A Journey Through Fire comments
by Steel Falcon on Jul. 26th, 2010 9:55 pm
I updated the story
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re: A Journey Through Fire comments
by quin desh on Jul. 27th, 2010 11:05 pm
I like this story a lot. but i have a question, since i made my self the smuggler i was wandering if you finished with him in part 2 or if you had further plans for him.
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re: A Journey Through Fire comments
by Steel Falcon on Jul. 27th, 2010 11:17 pm
Quin desh he's all yours lol... And it fits nicely with how your character needed to find maxon
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re: A Journey Through Fire comments
by quin desh on Jul. 28th, 2010 11:25 pm
SteelFalcon wrote: | Quin desh he's all yours lol... And it fits nicely with how your character needed to find maxon |
Ya it does, thanks
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re: A Journey Through Fire comments
by Rahvin3 on Aug. 7th, 2010 5:24 am
I might have to join in eventually...but only with your permission and with an idea of where you want the story to go....
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re: A Journey Through Fire comments
by NexusLuke on Aug. 14th, 2010 9:41 am
Good job Falcon and Rahvin3. Really liked how this started off.
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by Rahvin3 on Aug. 14th, 2010 6:24 pm
I have added my part, please tell me what you think.
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re: A Journey Through Fire comments
by Rahvin3 on Dec. 28th, 2010 8:03 am
Added another part.
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re: A Journey Through Fire comments
by Arrowhead. on Dec. 28th, 2010 10:47 am
Hey great job to both of you! The story is turning out to be very exciting! Can't wait to see how it all turns out! :D
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re: A Journey Through Fire comments
by Steel Falcon on Jan. 2nd, 2011 11:53 am
Think Hulk Hogan in his prime but without the bleach blonde hair color
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