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re: comments on "In search of a Jedi"
by quin desh on Aug. 12th, 2010 2:18 am
This is where you can post comments about the story "In search of a Jedi"
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re: comments on "In search of a Jedi"
by Reginox on Aug. 12th, 2010 10:03 am
I like were this story is going. It would help a lot if you used more punctuation though, its just easier to read that way. Other than that its turning out great!
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re: comments on "In search of a Jedi"
by Protector_Z on Aug. 12th, 2010 1:40 pm
Ace! Nobody talked about him again. Nice to see that addition there.
I look forward to the continuation of the story!
_________________ What if you were locked in a prison you can't see, hear, taste, smell or touch?... "Free your spirit"
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re: comments on "In search of a Jedi"
by quin desh on Aug. 12th, 2010 2:03 pm
Thanks Reginox, grammar never was my strong suit nether was righting for that matter. But what can you expect from a jock, I'll be working on it.
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