Comments for CRASH!

[Vadis]

Please feel free to comment on CRASH!

Thank you,
Vadis

[AltaVista]

I'm liking it Vadis! Good job!

[Brato Duott]

Me likey! Very good!

[Verasol]

Awesome story man, can't wait to hear about his past!

[Rahvin3]

This is great Vadis, I like Onora's character.

Although it seems strange having one Jedi referring to another as 'Boss'.

[Naandi]

I can't think of much more to add beyond what we've already talked about. I love the pacing and the whole feeling of the dream sequence. Vadis is certainly a man of mystery, and I think that's my favorite part. Well...no, I love his smart-aleck response to things a lot too. It makes him seem unique, especially since, even with his silliness, he seems like a completely dependable person. And yet someone with enough flaws to be believable. Yup! I like him. I look forward to seeing him under pressure. It's like, now that you've made your creation, let's test it's structural integrity under a little stress. Bwhahahaha.

[Vadis]

Thanks all for the comments, I appreciate them!

Rahvin3 wrote:

This is great Vadis, I like Onora's character. Although it seems strange having one Jedi referring to another as 'Boss'.

Agreed! But she is a companion after all who basically works for him so I "ok'd" Boss as appropriate.

[Rahvin3]

Jedi Vadis wrote:

Rahvin3 wrote: This is great Vadis, I like Onora's character. Although it seems strange having one Jedi referring to another as 'Boss'. Agreed! But she is a companion after all who basically works for him so I "ok'd" Boss as appropriate.

Haha, yeah I agree, it is appropriate, but still.... 'unique'?

[Vadis]

Appreciate the compliment.

[NexusLuke]

Very nice Vadis. You are becoming quite the story teller. Looking forward to more.

[Vadis]

Thank you, Sir. I appreciate your encouragement. More to come...