Time Will Tell comments

[Steel Falcon]

Please post any comments you have about my second character story here... Can't wait to see what everyone thinks

[Protector_Z]

I liked the battle, specially the falcon punch!

And I love characters interactions, so +1 for that. Let's see where this goes

[Erolene]

Agreed, the falcon punch was awesome.

[Reginox]

Where was this meditation room?

[Reginox]

And for some reason, the name Nevari sounds very familiar. Could you refresh my memory as to who she is? Thanks, this is looking really good. I loved the old man fight.



P.S. The Falcon Punch was awesome. For a second there I thought the Sith was going to disintegrate or blow up lol.

[Steel Falcon]

Reginox wrote:

Where was this meditation room?

I finished my first story with Falco and Nevari meditating in the plant room... If need be review the end of the first story

Reginox wrote:

And for some reason, the name Nevari sounds very familiar. Could you refresh my memory as to who she is? Thanks, this is looking really good. I loved the old man fight.

Nevari is Erolene's ingame character... I asked her could I use her character...

[Reginox]

Aahhh ok, thanks just wanted to make the reading experience more clear. It has been a while since I read the last part of your character story.

[Rahvin3]

It is looking REALLY great, I hope you write the next one soon...

[Reginox]

Just one more question, I assume this is happening before the scattered thread?

[Steel Falcon]

Reginox wrote:

Just one more question, I assume this is happening before the scattered thread?

yes my character story starts not long before the scattered thread, after the second story the scattered story comes into play

[Reginox]

Ooooook. Thanks!

[Steel Falcon]

I updated my story for those that want to continue reading

[Reginox]

My keen instincts tell me that something violent is about to happen.

[Steel Falcon]

Reginox wrote:

My keen instincts tell me that something violent is about to happen.

oh really? You think so? Please tell me about these keen instincts,

What makes you think something violent is going to happen? And what kind of violent thing

[Reginox]

If I told you about them... then you would know how to acquire them... I can't allow that to happen...

Erolene is going to have enough of you sarcastic remarks and stab you with her lightsaber while you are meditating.