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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by Steel Falcon on Jul. 9th, 2010 11:36 am
Very good erolene, hurry with the next part haha just kidding take your time but I am ready to continue the story
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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by Reginox on Jul. 9th, 2010 8:26 pm
Very nice! A lot better than my jumbled up mess of a story. I have some grammar problems...
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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by Rahvin3 on Jul. 9th, 2010 10:34 pm
Very Nice! Up until now I had not really had the time to read the Role Playing topics, now I see that I have been missing out. Very impressive.
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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by Protector_Z on Jul. 10th, 2010 10:50 am
Very nice Erolene, I hope there are more parts to it
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Jao ThaunOverseer The Last Jedi
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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by Jao Thaun on Jul. 10th, 2010 5:52 pm
Ah! Finally a story that doesn't involve me getting almost-killed and saved by the storyteller... LOL
Good story Erolene!
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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by Corelion_Ordo on Jul. 10th, 2010 5:56 pm
*likes*
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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by Erolene on Jul. 11th, 2010 1:21 am
Jao Thaun wrote: | Ah! Finally a story that doesn't involve me getting almost-killed and saved by the storyteller... LOL
Good story Erolene! |
Aw... Thanks, everyone. I hope to write another piece soon.
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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by Jao Thaun on Jul. 13th, 2010 11:04 pm
Good story, I hope we get to choose our lightsaber combat forms... I'm not sure which I'll choose yet.
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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by Reginox on Jul. 15th, 2010 9:01 am
^Juyo all the way man! This looking is really good Erolene!
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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by Reginox on Jul. 24th, 2010 3:53 pm
This is great! I like how you are going through each form, I had no idea that Makashi could be used with two sabers.
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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by Erolene on Jul. 24th, 2010 4:23 pm
Reginox wrote: | This is great! I like how you are going through each form, I had no idea that Makashi could be used with two sabers. |
I didn't either, until I heard about Asajj Ventress. Apparently, that's sort of her signature form. http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Asajj_Ventress
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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by Reginox on Jul. 24th, 2010 4:33 pm
Wow, thats neat. I guess that Asajj just isnt very good at the true two sabered version of Makeshi. I picture it being much more calm and controlled, like Count Dooku with two lightsabers.
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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by Steel Falcon on Jul. 24th, 2010 5:19 pm
Very nice can't wait for the next part haha ;)
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re: No Place Like Home - Comments
by NexusLuke on Aug. 15th, 2010 10:05 pm
Very good. You have a lot of talent for someone your age. Looking forward to more.
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