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re: Special Delivery! - Discussion
 by Protector_Z on Oct. 26th, 2009 11:40 am
((hey man, you can keep this long as long as this keep this good  This is getting exciting though, at least for a test run, hehe. I used to participated in a matrix-universe fanfic back in the day  hope more people jump in the mix soon though))
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re: Special Delivery! - Discussion
by Avissi on Oct. 26th, 2009 1:34 pm
((ya more people would be cool. lol though hardcore fail on the sith side if we end up with 20 republic guys some how sneaking onto their ship. i hope i did your character justice too, i wasnt sure if you were going for a super force user or a more passive character with maybe battle meditation or something. But i thought it would be cool if you were flinging sith around with the force))
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re: Special Delivery! - Discussion
by Protector_Z on Oct. 27th, 2009 5:36 pm
((yeah, this was not the way I planned Maxon's fate  . I was planning on writing on what was going on in the Sith ship with him, (y'know, since it's MY char) but was undecided if I should do it in another thread, because I would elaborate his backstory more in-depth (so everybody would understand him more) and didn't want to take out the focus of the story...
I would like to ask to remove Maxon's last part. In my view of him, he would never turn to the dark side. I would explain why if you guys let me elaborate on his backstory...
That really upset me  It's like killing my char...))
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re: Special Delivery! - Discussion
by Jao Thaun on Oct. 27th, 2009 7:22 pm
(I deleted it per your request... sorry about that, but from reading your character's bio I thought he had struggled with the darkside... go ahead and take the story where Avissi left off)
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re: Special Delivery! - Discussion
by greenlion on Nov. 2nd, 2009 7:55 pm
so far this is a good story
_________________ Luke 22 36: Then said he unto them, But now, he that hath a purse, let him take it, and likewise his scrip: and he that hath no sword, let him sell his garment, and buy one.
37: For I say unto you, that this that is written must yet be accomplished in me, And he was reckoned among the transgressors: for the things concerning me have an end.
38: And they said, Lord, behold, here are two swords. And he said unto them, It is enough.
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re: Special Delivery! - Discussion
by Jao Thaun on Nov. 2nd, 2009 8:13 pm
Yeah it is a good story! I've enjoyed it.
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re: Special Delivery! - Discussion
by Avissi on Nov. 2nd, 2009 10:23 pm
well hey greenlion welcome to the guild. and if you wanna make a character you welcome to write yourself into the story too
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re: re: Special Delivery! (Everyone posts when possible)
by greenlion on Nov. 2nd, 2009 10:37 pm
hope you do not mind me righting about you charecter Jao Thaun.
_________________ Luke 22 36: Then said he unto them, But now, he that hath a purse, let him take it, and likewise his scrip: and he that hath no sword, let him sell his garment, and buy one.
37: For I say unto you, that this that is written must yet be accomplished in me, And he was reckoned among the transgressors: for the things concerning me have an end.
38: And they said, Lord, behold, here are two swords. And he said unto them, It is enough.
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re: Special Delivery! - Discussion
by Avissi on Nov. 2nd, 2009 10:42 pm
((also in the role playing threads are the OOC Introductions if you want to explain more about your characters background and physical appearence outside of the story))
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re: Special Delivery! - Discussion
by Jao Thaun on Nov. 2nd, 2009 10:54 pm
Not at all...  just don't let me die lol
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re: re: Special Delivery! (Everyone posts when possible)
by greenlion on Nov. 2nd, 2009 11:04 pm
no problem but you did get a little crispy
_________________ Luke 22 36: Then said he unto them, But now, he that hath a purse, let him take it, and likewise his scrip: and he that hath no sword, let him sell his garment, and buy one.
37: For I say unto you, that this that is written must yet be accomplished in me, And he was reckoned among the transgressors: for the things concerning me have an end.
38: And they said, Lord, behold, here are two swords. And he said unto them, It is enough.
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re: Special Delivery! - Discussion
by Jao Thaun on Feb. 19th, 2010 1:05 pm
Thanks Ace for keeping the story going, I hope others will also contribute and add their characters into this story.
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re: Special Delivery! - Discussion
by Protector_Z on Feb. 22nd, 2010 11:02 am
Yeah, I hope the story comes back to life lol
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re: Special Delivery! - Discussion
by Grenn Reclii on Mar. 28th, 2010 2:42 pm
wanted to expand more on Jao and event following but i gotta go to work lol.
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re: Special Delivery! - Discussion
by Jao Thaun on Mar. 28th, 2010 10:32 pm
Good read... I can't wait to find out what happens to me
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