Naandi
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re: Trench Foot - Comments
by Naandi on Feb. 28th, 2011 3:18 am
Trench Foot
Abstract: Scattered by the Sith invasion on the Saint’s base, four survivors find themselves stranded on a moon and must face the dangers of it’s hostile environment before they can find a way to escape atmosphere and each other….
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We would be grateful for any comments or suggestions.
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Darius TarminthorArchensonVeteran Jedi Padawan
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by Archenson on Feb. 28th, 2011 3:32 am
Hope you have fun, wish I wasn't too lazy to join in.
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Naandi
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by Naandi on Feb. 28th, 2011 3:35 am
It would have been more fun with you along. But we're grateful to have had you in the planning process.
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NexusLukeHonorary Staff Jedi Master
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by NexusLuke on Mar. 1st, 2011 12:51 am
Looking good so far! Of all the creepy places to land... I think it is worse than Dagobah.
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Naandi
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by Naandi on Mar. 2nd, 2011 10:49 pm
It's My Little Ponies all over again. Here I am having a perfectly wonderful conversation about politics and geography, and you're off sticking your finger in your nose.
Have to admit though, I giggled. There's nothing like seeing yourself through the eyes of your sister. -.-
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You're up, Vadis! Wheee, I get more excited every day.
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by AltaVista on Mar. 2nd, 2011 11:03 pm
Haha! Yeah, I cringed writing half of it. I kept wanting to be serious and be a bit more conscientious and dramatic, but... Aicha is just not a serious character. I wrote her up to be stupid and childish, those being the reasons why she failed to become a Jedi. No /wonder/ no one took her on as a padawan, right? :P Sigh...
Haha! And Naandi is not "mopey" like Aicha thinks she is. She's emotionally responding to the death of hundreds of her comrades and friends like any truly normal and socially balanced person would be, while Aicha is... playing in the mud. Errryup. They'll hate eachother soon enough. :D
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NexusLukeHonorary Staff Jedi Master
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by NexusLuke on Mar. 3rd, 2011 7:26 pm
Very nice Vista. Very nice.
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NexusLukeHonorary Staff Jedi Master
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by NexusLuke on Mar. 5th, 2011 11:53 am
Another happy landing.
I must admit, the stories are converging faster than I anticipated. Now things are going to get really interesting.
You have your hands full Naandi... Two jokesters vs one serious Jedi. Haha. Have fun. Looking forward to more.
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by Arrowhead. on Mar. 5th, 2011 1:27 pm
This one is pretty fun to read, I can't wait for mooore!
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by AltaVista on Mar. 15th, 2011 9:10 pm
Blargh.... I am so dropping behind schedule with my post. Sorries! I'll try to get one up tonight. :S
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by AltaVista on Mar. 15th, 2011 10:36 pm
Meeeeh... I cheated with my wall-o-text pose. Though I suppose "technically" we're still in the introduction phase. Oi! In any case... You're up to bat, Vadis! :D
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NexusLukeHonorary Staff Jedi Master
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by NexusLuke on Mar. 15th, 2011 10:50 pm
Haha nice! Down they go.
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Naandi
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re: Trench Foot - Comments
by Naandi on Mar. 26th, 2011 4:51 pm
Lost yer shirt. *snicker*
*refrains from making vague Galaxy Quest references* =p
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VadisJedi VadisHonorary Staff Young Jedi Master
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by Jedi Vadis on Mar. 26th, 2011 5:04 pm
Never saw that movie.
_________________ "Or those eighteen who died when the tower in Siloam fell on them—do you think they were more guilty than all the others living in Jerusalem? I tell you, no! But unless you repent, you too will all perish." Luke 13:4-5
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by AltaVista on Mar. 26th, 2011 6:33 pm
Naandi wrote: | Lost yer shirt. *snicker*
*refrains from making vague Galaxy Quest references* =p |
I was TOTALLY just thinking that! But since you mentioned it...
Sir Alexander Dane wrote: | I see you've managed to get your shirt off. |
Kidding aside, I liked your post, Vadis!
*busts out singing* " 'Cause I'm freeeeeeeeeeee.... freeeeeee faling, yeeeaaah!'
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