VadisJedi VadisHonorary Staff Young Jedi Master
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re: Trench Foot - Comments
by Jedi Vadis on Jun. 24th, 2011 1:06 am
Good stuff, Luke. Interesting that "the micro-bursts were scrambled."
Can't wait for all 4 mains to meet up in this story!
_________________ "Or those eighteen who died when the tower in Siloam fell on them—do you think they were more guilty than all the others living in Jerusalem? I tell you, no! But unless you repent, you too will all perish." Luke 13:4-5
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NexusLukeHonorary Staff Jedi Master
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re: Trench Foot - Comments
by NexusLuke on Jun. 24th, 2011 9:31 pm
Thanks, but you all will have to forgive me for the most unimaginative piece of RP ever written. It was basically an over glorified summary of the last 3 posts. LAME.
Sorry you had to wait so long for... that.
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re: Trench Foot - Comments
by AltaVista on Jun. 25th, 2011 10:52 am
NexusLuke wrote: | Thanks, but you all will have to forgive me for the most unimaginative piece of RP ever written. It was basically an over glorified summary of the last 3 posts. LAME.
Sorry you had to wait so long for... that. |
Don't say that! Sometimes it's totally cool to say that a character just wants to take a moment to sit back and collect his thoughts. It helps with story pacing, offers time for the character to develop between the action, and gives the audience a second to catch their breath. Nothing to be ashamed of!
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