NexusLukeHonorary Staff Jedi Master
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re: The Despondency of Echo-niner-six : COMMENTS
 by NexusLuke on Mar. 8th, 2011 10:58 pm
Feel free to leave comments, critiques, and feedback here. Thanks.
Story found HERE
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VadisJedi VadisHonorary Staff Young Jedi Master
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re: The Despondency of Echo-niner-six : COMMENTS
by Jedi Vadis on Mar. 8th, 2011 11:34 pm
Great stuff! Am eager to hear what happens next.
_________________ "Or those eighteen who died when the tower in Siloam fell on them—do you think they were more guilty than all the others living in Jerusalem? I tell you, no! But unless you repent, you too will all perish." Luke 13:4-5  
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re: The Despondency of Echo-niner-six : COMMENTS
by AltaVista on Mar. 9th, 2011 12:05 am
Oooooo0000ooooh, did he get hit with space debris from the blowed-up ship?! :P
Fun stuff, Luke! Glad to see you "throwing" yourself into this mess with us. :D
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Naandi
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re: The Despondency of Echo-niner-six : COMMENTS
by Naandi on Mar. 9th, 2011 1:50 am
Bwhaha! Moar destruction!!
I like it. I especially like how you found an original way of crashing your ship on our moon.
*Naandi drifts into a suddenly recalled memory* "Crash the ship! Crash the ship! BellBots are bad!"
Ahem. Yup, I like it. And I like how you portrayed the crew members. Then again, I like realism and the whole emergency civilian recruiting and mopping up seemed very Red Cross to me. I like it.
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