NexusLukeHonorary Staff Jedi Master
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by NexusLuke on Aug. 23rd, 2010 4:42 pm
Wow, very nice Master Thaun! Good ole trooper combat mingled with fighter squadron action was a nice break from the norm.
Can't wait for parts II and III !
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by General Vox on Aug. 23rd, 2010 5:00 pm
Beside the scattered thread and the quest for the holocron this is the best one
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by Erolene on Aug. 23rd, 2010 5:50 pm
Wow. This is epic Jao! I can't wait to read the rest.
_________________ Keeper of the Corellian Creme Pie
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by Reginox on Aug. 23rd, 2010 6:04 pm
Awesomeness! Can't wait to see you get into the thick of it Jao!
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Vly
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by Vly on Aug. 24th, 2010 12:19 am
Wow! That was truly awesome Jao! I can't wait to read the rest. Thanks for sharing.
_________________ "Make level paths for your feet and take only ways that are firm. Do not swerve to the right or the left; keep your foot from evil." Proverbs 4:26-27
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by Reginox on Aug. 24th, 2010 6:47 pm
Really nice Jao, part two is great!
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VadisJedi VadisHonorary Staff Young Jedi Master
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by Jedi Vadis on Aug. 24th, 2010 10:06 pm
“Only a survivor can make accusations”
Ha! Love it!
_________________ "Or those eighteen who died when the tower in Siloam fell on them—do you think they were more guilty than all the others living in Jerusalem? I tell you, no! But unless you repent, you too will all perish." Luke 13:4-5
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by Protector_Z on Sep. 8th, 2010 3:11 pm
uhhh, I like it! Can't wait for chapter 3
_________________ What if you were locked in a prison you can't see, hear, taste, smell or touch?... "Free your spirit"
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by NewYears1978 on Jul. 12th, 2011 8:45 pm
Wow this is incredible! Glad to have read this!
Now the video I am working on makes much more sense to me. Exciting!
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Naandi
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by Naandi on Jul. 12th, 2011 10:01 pm
It's so nice to be part of a guild with such a rich back-story. Makes me proud to be a Saint.
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VadisJedi VadisHonorary Staff Young Jedi Master
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by Jedi Vadis on Jul. 13th, 2011 12:32 am
That was great, and a fun read!
_________________ "Or those eighteen who died when the tower in Siloam fell on them—do you think they were more guilty than all the others living in Jerusalem? I tell you, no! But unless you repent, you too will all perish." Luke 13:4-5
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by Deepspace_5 on Jul. 13th, 2011 11:39 am
Impressive!
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Most impressive!
Great story/foundation to the guild.
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by Erolene on Jul. 14th, 2011 11:59 am
Great ending, Jao. *applauds*
_________________ Keeper of the Corellian Creme Pie
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NexusLukeHonorary Staff Jedi Master
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by NexusLuke on Jul. 28th, 2011 9:46 pm
That was a very good last installment Jao! Loved it!
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re: "The Genesis"- Comments
by Bellek-Varga on Jul. 28th, 2011 11:05 pm
very nice
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